Five Corners: The
Marked Ones
BY Cathi Shaw
Published: January 30,
2014
Genre: YA/ Fantasy
Growing
up in a sleepy village untouched by distant wars and political conflicts, it
was easy for Thia, Mina and Kiara to forget such horrors existed in the Five
Corners. That is until the dead child is found; a child that bears the same
strange birthmark that all three sisters possess. A Mark their mother had
always told them was unique to the girls. Kiara's suspicions grow as their Inn
is soon overrun with outsiders from all walks of life. Strangers, soldiers and
Elders who all seem to know more about what is happening than the girls do.
After Mina barely survives an attack in the forest, the sisters are faced with
a shattering secret their mother has kept from them for years. As danger closes
in around them, the sisters are forced from their home and must put their trust
in the hands of strangers. With more questions than answers, Kiara finds
herself separated from everyone she loves and reliant on an Outlander who has
spent too much time in army. She doesn't trust Caedmon but she needs him if she
has any hope of being reunited with her sisters and learning what the Mark
might mean.
Cathi
Shaw lives in Summerland, BC with her husband and three children. She is often
found wandering around her home, muttering in a seemingly incoherent manner,
particularly when her characters have embarked on new adventure. In addition to
writing fiction, she teaches rhetoric and professional writing in the
Department of Communications at Okanagan College and is the co-author of the
textbook Writing Today.
Excerpt from Chapter 1:
Kiara felt her own mother
watching her closely. She forced her gaze away from the small lifeless form.
Brijit murmured softly to the parents and then moved to Kiara's side.
"Come away from here,
Kiara," her mother said firmly.
But Kiara couldn't stop herself
from looking back at the child, noting how someone had twined a pretty scarf
around her neck, concealing the ugly slashes that she knew were hidden beneath
the colorful material. The result of a blade taken to vulnerable flesh. This
poor girl had had no chance against her assailant.
Brijit tugged on her arm
insistently. "There is nothing more for us to do here," she whispered
in a hushed undertone. "Let’s go and give the family some peace."
Kiara shook her head, noticing
for the first time the buzz of voices around her. The small room was filled
with interested townsfolk, people who had never given a care for this family,
suddenly drawn to the run down shack out of morbid curiosity. Kiara felt a
sudden wave of shame wash over her. She suddenly wondered what she was doing
here?
True, Brijit had come to wash
and dress the child and had asked for Kiara's help in carrying the dead body,
remarkably heavy for one so small. Death did not bother Kiara and she was
strong enough to hoist weights around. Her little sister, Thia, while a healer
like her mother, had not been large enough to help with this task.
But the heavy work had been
completed hours ago. And still Kiara had stayed, transfixed by this tiny person
who was no more.
Don’t try to deny it, she told herself vehemently, you know why you’re
here.
She had seen the Mark on the
child's shoulder. She resisted the urge to rub her own shoulder where an
identical Mark was hidden beneath her tunic. It was something she’d believed
she only shared with her sisters. But this child proved different.
And there was no question that
this child had been assassinated.
Suddenly it was hard to breath,
the walls closing in around her. She had to be away from that place. Kiara
pushed through the door of the shack while her mother was stopped by one of the
family members.
She stood in the muddy yard,
drawing in deep breaths of the frosty fall air, trying to calm down.
"Tell no one of what you
have seen, Kiara."
She whipped around and saw
Brijit behind her, calmly tying her bonnet before they started the journey
home.
"Why?" Kiara asked,
her voice rough with emotion.
Brijit did not answer for
moment, instead she pushed past Kiara to where the horses were waiting and
mounted her small mare.
Kiara watched her mother through
narrowed eyes. She had begun to suspect that Brijit was hiding things from her.
And she didn't like it.
When it was clear that Brijit
intended to leave this place with or without her, Kiara mounted in silence and
turned her horse toward home.
"I saw it, Brijit,"
she said quietly, refusing to let the matter rest.
Brijit looked up suddenly, worry
lines on her forehead.
"You can tell me to be
silent but until you share what you know, I'm not likely to be. What in Five
Corners is happening? This isn't the first death like this ...?" She heard
the question lingering in her voice, even though she knew the truth. She was
sure, based on her mother’s reaction when they’d arrived, that this was not the
first innocent death Brijit had stumbled upon.
Brijit sighed. Then looked ahead
on the path. "No. It's not," she admitted, confirming Kiara’s
suspicions. "Another child was found in the Lowlands. He was killed in the
same way."
"Did he have the ..."
Kiara hesitated. They never spoke of the Mark.
"Yes," Brijit said
quickly, before Kiara could voice it.
"And two more near the mountains to
the North."
A rock of fear tightened in
Kiara’s stomach. She never would have guessed her mother would keep so many
deaths a secret.
"Who is doing this?"
Kiara asked quietly, trying to calm her mind. "And why?"
“Stop with the interrogation,
Kiara!” Brijit’s voice was high pitched and shrill and so unlike her mother
that Kiara could only stare in shock.
Brijit closed her eyes for a
moment. Then she opened them and forced a brittle smile to her lips. "I
don't know who would do such a thing, Kiara. Sometimes there are people who are
... not right in their head. And they kill things they shouldn't."
Like Johnny Oldsfeld, Kiara
thought. He killed small animals for the sport of it. He liked to watch them
suffer and eventually die. But this was different. Johnny didn't chose only
those animals that had white spots.
And Brijit was avoiding Kiara's
eyes a little too much. She was focused on the road refusing to look at her.
She looked almost guilty. But why would that be? Her mother was a healer not a
killer. Surely Brijit had nothing to feel guilty for.
"Is there nothing we can
do?" Kiara asked, anger tingeing her words.
Brijit shook her head. "Be
on the lookout for strangers," she offered softly.
Kiara stared at the back of her
mother's head as Brijit rode ahead of her. Suddenly Brijit turned back.
"Oh, and Kiara ..."
"Yes?"
"Say nothing of this to
your sisters."
Kiara's eyes narrowed as she
considered her mother's words. Brijit knew more than she was letting Kiara
believe. And Kiara was determined to uncover what her mother was hiding.
Thanks for hosting me, Itara! :)
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